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A brief twitter thread chat between @RandomiseUser, @Endo_Chick, and myself got me thinking about character appearance in games.  I set out to put some ideas down as to how games structure this, and why I’m so drawn to character appearance in the games I enjoy.

Cool games that force me into the skin of a pre-made, pre-packaged protagonist, quite frankly, annoy me.  Those set player characters rarely interest me deeply, and have never been close to any real concept of who I would prefer to be.  So the experience often becomes one of merely driving around an avatar designed by someone else, and ultimately enacting someone else’s story (no matter how many narrative ‘options’ the game design gives me).  In the end, I really don’t come to care about those characters.

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But of course, this mirrors real life.  We don’t choose to have the skin, complexion, sex, hair, eyes, shape, or attributes we’re born with.  We have some control over some aspects (increasingly even those once thought immutable), but we all learn to deal with the design we’ve been given.  Or we seek to tweak.  There’s a role for games that purposefully inject you in another sex, body, or race as part of a larger narrative or moral goal, but I’m speaking purely about games that pre-design the protagonist primarily as your vehicle for experiencing the game world.

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Playing modded Skyrim in Roman armor

In the triple experience of gameplay, narrative, and character, I usually gravitate to character the most.  I can forgive a lot of crappy gameplay in good faith (too much grind, clunky mechanics, repetition, etc.).  As a writer, sloppy or clichéd narrative bugs the shit out of me, but to be honest, we don’t turn to games for well-written stories with nuance and depth (although there are some exceptions, such as Bioshock Infinite).  But if a developer puts genuine thought and effort put into customizable player creation, I come back to that game again and again.  It holds meaning for me.

Games I enjoy make this work in a few different ways, both single-player and MMORPGs.

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Guild Wars 2 (Human, Norn, and Silvari)

Some have a limited template of designs (hair, faces, shapes, etc.) that you can mix and match in various combinations.  It’s the bare minimum of customizing your player character, and sometimes causes the unfortunate circumstance of running into your twin in the world as you encounter someone with the same look as you.  I suspect some rendering limitations in that game’s engine are the probable technical reasons behind this choice.  Often, good games will help temper this with providing a wealth of outfits for your character, usually in the in-game store.  MMORPG Guild Wars 2 has innovative but limited physical forms for your avatar, but a huge range of expanding options for clothes, weapon types, and accessories.  It has a consumables system that allows you to apply any unlocked look to any armor or weapon you use, so you don’t need to surrender your look when you upgrade your gear.

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The Secret World MMORPG

Similarly, The Secret World (the best MMORPG you’ve probably never heard of or played) has hidden “combat armor” and allows you to present your avatar dressed however you want given a wide palette of options, reward clothing, and purchased looks.   Weapon customization is not as flexible as Guild Wars 2, but it exists.  As a serious game that uses a modern, real-world setting (albeit one infused with Lovecraftian monsters, aliens, and secret societies), you might think it would skew toward prioritizing modern, Western fashion.  But no, it’s quite common to see people dressed like Roman soldiers, future robots, death’s-head demons, and killer squirrels running through the world hubs.  Players in The Secret World often wear the dream cosplay outfits you expect they would wear in real-life if they could.

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Dragon Age 2, pre-make Hawke (left) and my Hawke (right)

Elsewhere on the spectrum of customizable character creation is the pre-made protagonist character that you can “make over.”  In single-player Dragon Age 2, you play Hawke, who has a mostly-linear story-line that you can influence, but you also have the option to mold his appearance to better fit your imagination.  The same is true for the female Hawke option.  The Dragon Age series aims for an immersive fantasy experience, including scripted romance between your character and some of your companions, so I find it a welcome option to be able to craft your avatar’s appearance.

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Saints Row IV pre-made protagonist (left) and mine (right)

On the flip side is Saints Row IV, an amusing (in its own right), tongue-in-cheek parody of games like the Grand Theft Auto series (which have no real first-player story physical feature customization and force you play as pre-made characters).  But the generic Slab McBulkhead main protagonist of Saints Row IV can be customized as in Dragon Age 2.  This is a welcome expectation of a free-wheeling game that also allows you to fight with guns that launch toilet plungers and elastic dildo bats.

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First-person only view in Bioshock Infinite

The final category I’ll briefly mention is the first-person only games that coyly prevent us from viewing or customizing our character in third-person.  Booker in Bioshock Infinite is a fully fledged and voiced character, but his appearance remains off-camera (except for a few brief glances).  Such first-person shooters have a genre history of keeping player appearance vague, but the same mechanics are on view in the new No Man’s Sky and other exploration games.  One might think that keeping things first-person would foster greater self-identification and immersion with the player, but that’s not the case for me.  Since the action is always happening on a flat plane (my monitor), I experience such a game as I would a movie.  My life-long conditioning with this structure has been to disengage and observe.  However, when I can rotate the camera and see my avatar fully embodied in a 3D space, running around the landscape as a body and not just my gaze, my own self-identification and immersion is actually greater.  There’s still a screen between us, but that screen is not built directly into the mechanics of my gaze.

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The Sole Survivor in Fallout 4 (you may have noticed a theme or two)

Not everyone prioritizes character design.  It’s not something that matters to all (most?) players.  There’s a long list of games offering only a bland, interchangeable, and ultimately disposable character model for the player, where the developers have given only cursory thought to appearance.  However, I do give it a great deal of thought, and effort, and I’m probably seeking a mix of comfort, self-identification, wish fulfillment, creative input, and a pleasant objectified gaze when I play a game with a custom character.

A friend of mine once described the kinds of games I like as “Barbie for boys.” I love character building and appearance crafting.  Along with all the fun stuff the game lets me do (fight monsters, explore space, survive in the radioactive wasteland…), and a strong narrative journey I can help enact, I’m drawn to the creative process of character design.  It doesn’t matter if I’m just goofing around and causing vehicular havoc in downtown Los Santos with friends or slaying the great dragons of Tamriel alone, I’m happiest if I can join with the effort of the game designers who have already crafted the world and the adventure.  I’m eager to bring the main character.

(Go follow @RandomiseUser and @Endo_Chick for deeper and better game analysis than mine.  You can follow me at @gmdevore.)

 

 

 

 

20 Free Copies of Pantheon Available

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I recently published a new revision of my novel Pantheon.  Now readers can read the novel serialized over 6 separate volumes, or as the original 700 page omnibus edition (in both print and ebook form).  I can share the first volume with potential new readers, instead of foisting a huge tome on them.🙂

To celebrate, I’ve put 20 FREE copies of the ebook version of Volume I up on Amazon.  If you’ve been interested in reading my novel but not yet picked it up, here’s a chance to sample it and see if you like it!  Or if you have friends who might be interested, you can share the link with them.  The free ebooks are first come / first serve (and ‘US only’ too for some weird Amazon reason).

You can claim your free ebook copy at https://giveaway.amazon.com/p/996ffece74b7cfbf   Click the bouncy treasure chest to claim it.  And please leave a review!

Thanks for all your support!

The Death of Giordano Bruno

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I was writing today about the Campo de’Fiori in Rome (preparing a small waking guide for a friend soon to visit the city) and happened to notice that it was the 416th anniversary of the execution of Giordano Bruno, a personal hero of mine.

Bruno was originally a Dominican monk, but left the order to roam northern Europe and England, usually one step ahead of the Catholic Church who considered him a dangerous heretic. Bruno believed that the universe was divine in itself, and that such divinity was contained within every living creature. He wrote, “Nature is simply God in things,” a beautiful statement, but one that went against Catholic theology.  He also believed in such heresies as the heliocentric model of the universe where the Earth revolved around the sun.

Eventually, the Inquisition caught up with him in Venice. He was imprisoned in Rome for several years before being condemned to death. After the sentence was read, Bruno said, “You judges who condemn me make the pronouncement with much more fear than I who receive it.” Bruno was executed in the Camp de’Fiori on 17 February, 1600. He was gagged, bound naked to a stake and set on fire.

After 1600, the square was regularly used as a place of execution. Many people, criminals and heretics, met their fates here, either by being burnt or hung.  Today, the picturesque square, the only major square in Rome that does not have a church in it, is dominated by an imposing statue of Giordano Bruno.

I can recommend a good book about Bruno and his times: The Pope and the Heretic by Michael White.

Crows: A Tyrant’s Empire

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I mentioned in my last post that my new mystery novel A Murder of Crows on the Wall takes place in 209 CE. For most people in the Roman world, I suppose that year was one of relative calm and security, although they could easily remember violence and civil war. A North African military man named Septimius Severus had been their emperor for 16 years. In the beginning, he had been just one of four powerful men attempting to seize power after the assassination of the despotic Commodus (the villain from that Gladiator movie). Severus had succeeded by force of arms after a chaotic four-year civil war when Roman legions fought other Roman legions on behalf of their favored imperial candidate.

After a short respite, the question of who was finally going to be the uncontested emperor was only solved after a big, bloody battle in 197, twelve years before the opening of my story. For context, Bush’s electoral defeat of John Kerry was only 12 years ago from now. The seizure of the throne by a powerful family of upstarts and outsiders from North Africa was fresh in the Romans’ minds.

Severus was a cruel and ruthless man who valued the might of the military above all else. He began a new imperial dynasty at Rome, and his family members mostly took after him. His eldest son Caracalla would eventually be his disastrous successor, becoming what Edward Gibbon called, “the common enemy of mankind” (quite a statement given the general reputation of Roman emperors). Caracalla’s reign would also begin with great violence, including the murder of his brother Geta by his own hand in the presence of their mother. Both brothers are characters we meet in my novel.

It is no surprise that between 197 and 209, Severus conducted several large-scale military campaigns around the empire. Warfare was mostly what he knew, and he felt the most comfortable on campaign. The economy and internal politics at Rome were still relatively stable, an inheritance from the period of prosperity cultivated by the second century emperors (such as Hadrian and Marcus Aurelius). Severus launched offensives in the east, conquering some land from the mighty Parthian empire, and in Africa where he established a line of fortifications to protect the southern frontier of the Roman Empire.

Severus then turned his sights on the province of Britain, to do something the Romans had never quite been able to accomplish­– lay claim to the entire north of the island (modern Scotland). So for the first time in two generations, Roman troops marched into Britain and conducted a brutal war of suppression against the northern tribes. Severus led the campaign, although he was old and infirm and had to be carried around in a litter because of his painful gout. Before the end of the war, he would be dead and his son Caracalla would hurry back to Rome as the new emperor.

This northern war is the backdrop for my novel. My main character, a Romanized Greek named Gaius Pedius, is a mapmaker and surveyor sent (with a hundred others) to Britain in order to re-survey property lines in the province. It is part of the war effort, since Severus hopes to redraw the tax records in his favor and extract more funds for his expensive campaigns. While there, Pedius stumbles into a murder mystery involving a mysterious religious cult and five dead soldiers.

(More information about A Murder of Crows on the Wall can be found at garydevore.com/crows/)

 

 

 

 

209 CE – A Year of Murder

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I’ve finished the entire working draft of my next novel that is set during the year 209.  It is a historical murder mystery with a cast of Romans, Greeks, and native Britons. It is called A Murder of Crows on the Wall, a title that references both the fact it takes place along Hadrian’s Wall in northern England and involves initiates of the mystery cult of the god Mithras (who were called ‘crows’).

For the past year, my head has been in the third century CE, specifically the autumn of 209.  It’s been interesting to see what focusing upon that one period of history has brought up creatively.

Getting the novel finished has been a long process, but I’m so happy it’s finally done.  In the coming weeks I’ll post some thoughts here about the novel’s setting, characters, and theme, and also about the process of writing this historical murder mystery.  The next step is to solicit beta readers and ultimately agents and publishers.  Join me in my historical journey!

(More information about A Murder of Crows on the Wall can be found at garydevore.com/crows/)

 

Down on Downton

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I accidentally encountered an episode of the final season of Downton Abbey last night.  The TV was turned to PBS when an On Demand show ended so I let it continue in the background as I worked on the computer.  I gave up watching Downton sometime in the third season because I’d grown annoyed at it and came to suspect its politics (plus after Dan Stevens’ Matthew Crawley character was killed off, why continue?).  So last night’s season 6 episode was the first I’d seen since season 3.

Of course I could immediately pick up most of the narrative strands.  That’s how soap operas work.  But as it wore on, I was floored by how sloppy the writing seemed to be for this episode.  It played like a French and Saunders parody of Downton (minus the laughs).  It was the Mr Carson and Mrs Hughes wedding episode.  So I had some thoughts about how writers can avoid the clichés Julian Fellowes employed in this episode.

If you’re a fan of the show, I’m sorry to offer some critique.  I’m not its intended demographic.  I rankle at how, in my opinion, Downton effortlessly infuses class division and nationalism with a fuzzy nostalgia.  The fact that Michelle and Marcus Bachmann cosplay as the Granthams should tell you a thing or two as well!  I concede that other intentions it has might be colored by its soft-focus, costume-porn, Masterpiece setting, and any character complexity is often thwarted by its glorified soap opera structure, but Archie Bunker has shown us that the gulf between writer’s intent and audience reception can be vast and dangerous.  From the beginning, Downton asked me to care about the Very Important relationship problems of a house full of straight people, and to vilify the only pitiable inconstantly-written gay character because it was 1912 don’t you know.  That was his fateOh, and any character’s lefty politics is just a silly phase.  By the end of season 3 (and the departure of Stevens) Downton held nothing for me.  Its simple moral universe is one I don’t ascribe to and don’t wish to visit.

But rather than a critique of Downton the series (I’ll leave that to the links offered above- take it up with those authors), I’m interested in unpacking episode 3 of season 6 to see how it relies on some very cliché and hackneyed narrative tools, in the hope that I and others can identify, understand, and avoid them in our own writing.

 

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The Dress

Perhaps the most egregious thing in the episode is the abortive plot point that goes nowhere.  In this episode it is “Mrs Hughes needs a wedding dress.”  Mary offers some of Cora’s clothes without telling her mother.  Mrs Hughes and the maids try on the clothes in Cora’s room.  Cora returns from a bad day out and makes an appearance in the drawing room with Mary, Edith, and The Earl but conveniently leaves before Mary can remember to tell her about the clothes (and of course Mary does not follow up on this or Cora turn around when she hears Mary’s voice cut off by the closing door). Yes, communication errors like this happen all the time in real life.  Bad scripts rely upon such communication errors in order to lazily advance a plot point.

What follows is high drama when Cora walks in and berates the lady staff for trying on her things in a very wooden scene (honestly, can anyone in the cast just recite lines without  playing an actual emotion like Elizabeth McGovern?).  The actors portraying the lady staff get to play chastised briefly, Mary gets to play indignant briefly, and Cora gets to apologize.  And the whole thing is resolved very quickly. It serves absolutely no narrative purpose other than to create some bland drama for drama’s sake, and to eat up some air time.  No one is affected by it in any way.

I could be generous and say that narratively, perhaps, this diversion serves to reinforce the class roles of all involved– Cora gets to be the wealthy benefactor giving hand-me-downs in the end, and the maids get to be put back in their servile place, but even this is sloppy since the whole thing is layered over with a schmaltzy “we owe Mrs Hughes so much” vibe (for no other reason than she has served loyally all these years). The whole thing still seems to me to be no more than manipulative filler.  It’s there to create some brief, cheap, empty drama, unburdened by actually having any point or consequence.

 

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The Farm

Speaking of Cora, apparently there’s some lurking unresolved plot point this season about her helping someone potentially losing a farm that the kitchen maid Daisy is very worked up about.  I was not interested enough to try and figure it out.  Daisy is told that Cora is involved somehow and is happy the Countess is taking charge.  She’s told not to say anything about it… but of course at first opportunity she blabs to Cora that she knows all about it. These sort of inconsistent characters are incredibly cliché, and it’s no coincidence Daisy’s inconsistency is often played for comedy.  We know she is going to be inconsistent.  We roll our eyes and say “that’s our Daisy.”  I suppose it is sort of the warm familiarity Downton audiences are looking for, but it’s still shoddy character motivation.

Back to the plot point: When Cora is told by Daisy that she knows about the farm, we know from her stumbling that Cora is not actually doing what Daisy thinks.  But does Cora actually explain that to Daisy and end the misunderstanding right there?  No!  Of course their conversation is interrupted by another character’s arrival and Daisy trots off.  Does Cora try to follow up with Daisy later to make things clear.  No!  Of course not.  Those two characters are not put together until later in the episode when Daisy again brings it up and again Cora stammers and AGAIN they’re interrupted before Cora can explain, and the topic is immediately dropped.  This is shoddy screenwriting again.  Contrived misunderstanding and poor communication skills, and that clichéd “third character interrupts two characters before things can be made clear and nothing is ever followed up on” device gets used twice in the same episode to the same characters!  Don’t do it in your writing.

 

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Mary Mary Why You Buggin’?

As an aside, Mary seemed to spend most of this episode just stating facts and having a reaction to things.  It is the ‘stating facts’ stuff that seems to be a hallmark of this show that is ripe for parody.  I imagine Dawn French in a flapper wig narrating all of the scenes we just saw for the benefit of whatever character happens to be in the drawing room.  Or whatever viewer missed the subtext because they ran to the toilet.

 

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The Return at the Wedding

Mrs Hughes has a Very Important Scene where she tells the Granthams that her and Mr Carson’s wedding will be “all about them.”  It will be their day, which is why they’re not having it on the estate and doing it all themselves.  On any other show it would be an opportunity for the staff to assert their humanity and independence.  On Downton it is in the context of how this all makes the Granthams feel.

After the wedding, the bride and groom are being toasted.  They are the center of everyone’s attention on their day.  Until the main toast is interrupted at that exact moment (another interruption!) by the return of black-sheep Tom Branson, fumbling into the festivities.  And the rest of the scene (and the end of the episode) is the Grantham’s teary reunion with him and his daughter.

The entrance of Tom is contrived and clichéd- down to him entering at the exact moment of the toast, allowing him to end the toast with his words and draw all focused attention on him.  This is not good writing.  This rarely happens outside bad writing.  And when it does, you probably have the feeling, “this is just like it happens in the movies!”  It is artificial.

And by having Tom return at that moment, Downtown gets to make Carson and Mrs Hughes wedding, the thing that she said was meant to be “all about them”, all about the Granthams.  Presumably Mr Carson and Mrs Hughes continue to stand there, glasses raised, while the camera remains swiveled to the teary Granthams and Tom reuniting.  Even on Mrs Hughes’ special day, the focus is on the elites and their story. It is this sort of thing that gets on my nerves and allows me not to just enjoy Downton the way that its fans do.  Or Michelle Bachmann.

Although it was supposed to be one of the major foci of season 6, we see the wedding of Carson and Mrs Hughes is really just another contrived plot device, a box to tick as the whole of Downton lurches toward its series conclusion.  Critics like to proclaim the under-stairs staff as the emotional anchors of the show (a bit of revision I don’t buy), but again and again, the status quo is reasserted in Downton– the hallmark of the soap opera.  The camera returns its focus to the rich people and their issues.  Fade to black.

 

This may have been one particular dud of an episode of Downton, but even if it does not comment on the larger series as a whole, it illustrates several hackneyed plot devices and a host of familiar but awkward clichés TV writers use all the time.  I suppose they return to and rely upon them in episodic shows because they’re familiar, easy, and simplistic.  And some audiences respond to them, or overlook them entirely, because they are expected.  By this point with Downton, one certainly knows exactly what to expect from this show.

I’m always trying to exorcise cliché from my own writing, to keep what I write from being too predictable or boring, and make it original.  This is not always easy or possible, but there are rewards in the effort.  That is one of the reasons why feedback and critique is often very valuable in the writing process, as well as paying critical attention to what, as a writer, you’re doing as you plan, plot, and write.  Examples like this episode of Downton can be illustrative of what to avoid, and hopefully bring up ideas about how it might be done better.  By you.

[Please note that in this discussion of Downton Abbey, I did not offer random, gratuitous praise of Maggie Smith.  That has also become a cliché.]

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